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this seems to me like it's more of a study in lighting effects than a completed movie. the characters look good, but the animation is a little stiff and there is no background to establish the situation.
is he in the city? an underground parking garage? if so, how are there giant lizards around that no one else is worrying about? i understand that creating a bunch more art assets takes time and effort and that you already put a lot into this, so whatever, if you feel like it there is room for improvement.

also, the word "creature" in the title makes me think there is going to be several different types of creatures, otherwise you could just call it "lizard police".

muen responds:

Hi, ArmyofDorkness. Thank you so much for your review. You're right about that there should be more than one creature! haha I want to expand the series with more films. This was an early film I made, and I did feel like there was room for improvement. If you watch my next film on Newgrounds, Game Grumps in 3D "Gackt", I think you will see that I correct the issues that you brought up. Thanks again.

i bet if this was a actual game for nintendo it would be super hard with awkward play control.

i feel like the script writer wasn't sure exactally where the joke was, and so just kind of brushed the plot on hoping to hit something funny.

Storyie responds:

The joke is a spoof off of The Exorcist. I just felt like you needed to write/comment for no reason at all cause you really didn't have anything better to do. Your comment equals meh to us.

sorry guys, I hate to be a dick, but...
this cartoon embodies everything I hate about anime.
lure us in with the promise of fighting robots, and then have humans complaining to each other for the whole time. I was far to bored to care about any of these characters, and there was a lot of them to bore me. You did so much work with voice acting and lip syncing that you would think something good would come of it, but it was all that voice acting that causes this cartoon to fail.

I really liked the history line you laid out in the opening, it is an interesting world that could be developed. My advice would be to concentrate on your fighting robot animation skills, and then cut 80 % of the human characters.

just my opinion.

+1 star for making a cartoon
+1 star because it's not as bad as most clockday stuff
-1 star because it features those annoying clocks, who are terrible characters
-1 star for lazy art
-1 star for the pointless benny hill scene.

RadioTubeClock responds:

lazy art? Come on now. Thanks for the review nonetheless.

I hate clock day.
These are the worst characters ever.
You knew you were making a terrible movie, and you did it anyway because of stupid clock day.
The only reason this is on front page is because a small circle of people need to stroke each other's egos.

FLOUNDERMANCLOCK responds:

Ahhhh, the first hate review of Clockday. It's like the first present you open on christmas. And kudos to you for not leaving a one sentence all caps review consisting entirely of misspelled homophobic slurs. If I were teaching baby tantrum anticlock reviews this one would get a solid C+ no doubt about it.

good story arc, perfect pacing, and actually funny.

plus smooth animation and clear sound.

good sounds and animation and stuff.

In my opinion you spent way to long being all like "i'm mysterious ooooooh"
i was confused, and then bored. just tell the story already.

my favorite part is how the trees and planets dance in time to the music. the last scene doesn't really have any good dancing.
also the loop skips a beat as it replays.

it was tedious to watch and all the jokes fell flat.
sorry, just being honest.
good animation and voice acting tho.

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